Reflection
I included my essay Jack from "Lord of the Flies" in my portfolio because it exemplifies my ability to conduct an in-depth analysis and thorough character assessment. I enjoyed writing this piece and had a fun time diving into the personalities of the character Jack. For this piece I used a wide range of textual evidence to support my writing. I also used an abundance of varying vocabulary words to help create my tone and opinion on the subjects. However, in this piece I lacked sentence structure changes, and the use of different sentence structures could have helped to create a more well developed writing style. In addition, some of the phrasing within the original piece was cluttered and required further work to make the analysis more simplistic and understandable.