Reflection
The following piece was a very creative assignment that I created with the help of a dear friend. We created a very interesting and detailed story that was one of our favorites. This piece showed off the creativity in both of us and had great vocabulary words that created a tone for are dark story line. The use of very intelligent well formulated sentences also made this piece great. Christian and I made this piece wonderful with the use of longer complex sentences to match the readers thought process. However, this piece did need a little organization work and touch up on some inconclusive details. Overall, the paper was fantastic and entertaining but did lack some realism, and the use of better organization along with more realistic facts made the story better.